OK, here's the deal. This is an idea for a story. I'm giving you the idea, the first line and how I want it to end. I haven't written down anything else. Do you want to read more? If you do, I'll write it and post it within a week.
Dancing with Robin
By Kevin Lindsey
Idea: Searching for a perfect moment with the perfect girl.
Nothing is ever perfect -- ever.
The snow shifted from flurries to flakes as we walked out of the coffee shop.
White dots danced in the little breezes of passing cars, giving us cool kisses on our faces as they landed and turned back into water. Then I think I feel a warm breath on my cheek and her lips brush my cheek. I turn and she runs ahead laughing.
I chase. I grab her hand she pulls me in and dances with me in the falling snow. Warmth between us and cold surrounding us. She leans into my ear and says, “You know what would be perfect right now?” We kiss.
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I like the idea. Can't wait to see it develop.
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